What are Clinical Trial Summaries . . . and Why Should I Care?

Clinical trial summaries are a bit newer than many types of medical writing. I’ve talked to plenty of medical writers and editors who don’t know what they are, though the word is spreading. When I started writing them in 2014 with an industry-leading company, they were really new, and the European Union rule that trial participants should receive a plain-language summary of the research was several years in the future.

What they are

Clinical trial summaries go by many names, including:

Clinical trial summaries are summaries of a research study, written for the people who took part and worded so other members of the public can understand what happened in the study.

Why clinical trial summaries?

Well, the EU made a rule … and since most drug and device companies are global, this rule threw entire industries into a tizzy trying to, as one executive has written, do the impossible.

A lot of people who enter clinical trials have dire diseases. Or they’re dying. The trial, either way, is important. Yet people were almost never finding out the results. This is unethical, and it discourages folks from signing up for research. “What did they do with my information?” “I never found out if the drug worked.” As a certain commander-in-chief likes to say, “Sad.”

Who writes clinical trial summaries?

The problem is, those writers aren’t trained to write for the public. They’re are often bench scientists, highly experienced in working with regulatory documents. Ask how many bullets should be in a bulleted list, or which punctuation marks are better for an academic audience? Not their area of expertise, any more than writing clinical study reports (CSRs) is mine (in fact, I wouldn’t be able to attempt a CSR at all). So, when can you start a sentence with a conjunction? When writing for the public! However, one study has concluded that the desired reading level “could not be achieved” in writing clinical trial summaries.

But … what if summaries were written by folks trained in plain language writing, as outlined in materials from the U.S. Centers for Disease Control?

After writing summaries for my client for a while, I got switched to plain-language editor. This was a good system, as the regulatory writing specialists were better at pulling information out of the regulatory documents than I was. (A CSR synopsis is a powerful tool for the plain-language writer, however.) The regulatory writing specialist would go through the clinical study report, or CSR, and draft a summary. I’d go back through it, check that we got the salient points, and then take the reading level down two to four grade levels. Here is an example.

Original summary text:

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